Friday 9 May 2014

100 Word Challenge Maclaren

100 word challenge
A loud buzzing noise filled the bathroom as a squeaky voice said “MAYDAY our rudder, wings and rocket boosters fell off, I’m going to crash land!” A deafening crash could be heard right throughout the house. “Now, we need to fix you so you can win the Tour de France championship.” Wailed the bees pit crew. They rushed up to him as he was twitching. “ I think he is dead… so I don’t think he can really win. Can he?” questioned the other person whilst he kicked the bee into the bath.

 “Now he definitely can’t race anymore!”

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